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February 27, 2013
By Crystalkendra SILVER, Pentwater, Michigan
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Crystalkendra SILVER, Pentwater, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; God gave you shoes to fit you, so put &#039;em on and wear &#039;em, be your self man, be proud of who you are&quot; - Eminem <br /> &quot;The question is not who you should be, it&#039;s how do YOU want to be remembered?&quot; - Lisa White

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I love him,
I'm his baby girl,
He's my hot army dude,
He makes me smile,
He makes me feel alive again,
And when he smiles,
God that makes me feel so good,
Like the sun comes out,
And it somes into me,
It makes me want to draw again,
Something I haven't done in five years,
I want to trace his lips,
And draw his eyes,
Those eyes that look so sad,
But when trained on me,
I see him open,
I see what no one elese could tell,
And I feel like I matter..

© Julia R., Bethesda, MD

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