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Father Figure

February 25, 2013
By lake33 BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
lake33 BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You want something? go get it!"


How you've stayed this long, it's a miracle. My only fear is that you'll see me drip a tear. You say you want the best for this family. I got a mom i can stand barely so you have to stay, that's what everyday i pray, that you father stay. Now lets reminisce, back to when it wasn't bliss. I was aroubd eight and it was very late. You and mom got to arguing and i heard the worst news I ever heard you say. "I'm leaving" i had trouble believing so i got a closer look while my little heart beating hard, i went to investigate the scene. I saw your tears flowing and my mom's anger growing, so I clutched you tight saying I wont let you go without a fight. I know I was young but I promise you I screamed at the top of my lungs. Your the only one I can talk to, only you. You say "Son it's going to be okay" but still see a rainy day. So sir thats why i cry to hear you say goodbye. You father mean a lot to me, I hope you see.


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It's a true story

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on Jul. 6 2022 at 6:50 am
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
where words fail music speaks <br /> success is a journey, not a destination<br /> <br /> when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE<br /> <br /> If you are able to look yourself<br /> in the mirror every day<br /> with the decisions that you make,<br /> that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ<br /> <br /> Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK<br /> <br /> haters will say what they want, but their hate will <br /> never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER<br /> <br /> If you follow your dreams, <br /> it means you follow your heart.<br /> if you do follow your heart, <br /> I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION

I love how you expressed your feelings in a straightforward but heart-touching manner...

Lil_Rune1234 said...
on Dec. 7 2019 at 6:39 pm
Lil_Rune1234, Sisters, Oregon
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Oh my gosh, This is heart-wrenching! I can tell you've been through a ton!

EBurn BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2014 at 12:49 am
EBurn BRONZE, McDonough, Georgia
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This is pretty good just don't charge things to make it rhyme perfectly and and just keep speaking from the heart man.