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Falling

December 30, 2012
By Anonymous

You are falling,
The world is black
You struggle against the invisible force
You know you cannot win
Yet so hard you try
Unwillingly, your eyelids falter
Your body gives up fight
Peace
Is given
As you fall
Into the black abyss
You don’t want to go there.
There are things left undone
Words unsaid
Deeds unthanked
They will need to wait until tomorrow
For you have been overtaken
Your captor?
Sleep.



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on Jan. 7 2013 at 11:22 am
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

Oh sorry ;) and sure!

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on Jan. 6 2013 at 10:51 pm
rakaha, South Jordan, Utah
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Sleep, Death, ya know, close enough:) thanks for commenting!

on Jan. 6 2013 at 4:21 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

I actually thought it was death. Really great job on this! Please read, rate, and comment on some of my stories! It means sooo much to me if you do :)