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Something Beautiful
December 20, 2012
today, it isn't just
another day.
today, i'll create
something beautiful.
you're not just
another person.
today, you're the
most beautiful.
our world isn't just
another place.
today, it's a
new adventure.
© Michelle M., Plainview, NY
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In_Love_with_Writing GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2013 at 8:07 am
I feel like you could make it more dramatic (not necessarily like va-va-voom poem, but more exaggerated in the concept). Like you could use someone's experience or try to pull some strings in your reader's heart. Try and make me cry or feel something. ***But if you don't agree, you don't have to listen to me. You're your worst critic and if you don't feel the same, feel free to ignore me. I could always be wrong :)
Emma-Riley PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 21 2013 at 11:17 am
do you have any ideas as to what i could do?
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 1:25 pm
It was cute and a nice concept, but you could have really run with the wind on this one. There was so much potential to completely make it speechless.
Emma-Riley PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 8:09 pm
aw, thanks Homestruck!!!! (:
Homestuck_Nerd said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 7:04 pm
this peom is ust really encuraging, and i think i will print this out and put it on my wall and read it every day and remember to look ahead because everything is better than it seems, and that everything is just awesome.
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