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What have you done?

October 26, 2012
By vbronk PLATINUM, Winona, Minnesota
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vbronk PLATINUM, Winona, Minnesota
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&ldquo;I&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&#039;t deserve me at my best.&rdquo; <br /> ― Marilyn Monroe

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What have you done?
Please don't go!
Don't you dare leave me!
I thought we were friends.
Life will go on without you,
this just will be amazingly tough.
Why treat me like this?
Why pretend that you don't care?
What have you done?

© Austin K., Studio City, CA

The author's comments:
This was a poem I wrote while one of my friends told me that they were moving away and the thought came into my mind that I would never see them again.
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vbronk PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2012 at 11:05 am
vbronk PLATINUM, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&#039;t deserve me at my best.&rdquo; <br /> ― Marilyn Monroe

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ahh thanks i feel honored. i wrote this because i knew the truth needed to be written!
ogeorgetown1 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 8:21 am
ogeorgetown1 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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&quot; never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game &quot;

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I like the line " Why pretend that you don't care?" because lots of people act ignorant to situations they really do care about. Your poem really speaks to me.