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Waiting

October 1, 2012
By deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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They all seem to be one, the weeks the months the years.
The time I’ve been waiting for an answer, the answer to my fears.
What should I do when I’ve waited all my life long?
Should I wait some more time? Or should I finish my song?
You seem to know everything, but no emotions do you show.
I have a longing, a pain inside. A wish that I could know.
What are you thinking, in that perfect mind of yours?
Will this “not knowing” pain go on? Forever does it endure?
So here I wait, unsure of whether I should move on,
But every time I try to turn away. Even more am I drawn.
Others come and go, but in my mind you do stay,
You’re driving me insane, with my heart you do play.
So please answer my question. This is my one last plea.
Please take these chains. And make me free.



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on Jan. 25 2013 at 10:01 pm
everybody-needs-some-body-to-love, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
EVERY BODY NEEDS SOMEBODY TO LOVE IN I CHOOSE YOU. <3

awww i loved it.it was sad touching beautiful poem. BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO !!!!

Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:30 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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it could be a little more specific but it is clear enough to understand.. I used to have the same feelings, and sometimes i still do, but you will learn to let the pain pour over you like water on a doll's face. Luv Blaque.