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Falling From the Sky

September 29, 2012
By deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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It’s obvious. The pain and sorrow in my eyes. Can’t you see?
It’s from loving someone who will never love me.
It’s like starting to fly but then suddenly you fall
It’s caused by hoping and waiting, but never getting a call.
I start to ask myself and wonder “what am I doing wrong?”
Will the time ever come when someone joins with my heart’s song?
I wonder if you notice me. I wonder if you care.
I can’t help but wish a silent prayer.
What if you do notice me? What if you really understand?
What if you’re the one wishing I would take your hand?
But as I sit here thinking. I realize that it’s not as it seems.
You obviously don’t like me. So it must just be a dream.
Tears fill my eyes as I sit with no reply.
It’s like learning to fly. And falling out of the sky.



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on Jan. 25 2013 at 10:13 pm
everybody-needs-some-body-to-love, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
EVERY BODY NEEDS SOMEBODY TO LOVE IN I CHOOSE YOU. <3

wow i felt that way before when u like someone who didnt like u back. but then i finally got over it. we all move on eventually hun....eventually. keep it up son ya doin great :D  

on Nov. 16 2012 at 9:24 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Thanks :) I've got a lot of experience "falling from the sky"

on Nov. 16 2012 at 8:53 pm
Hey! this is truly awesome!! I absolutely loved it one of those beautiful pieces that you can actually relate to..please keep writing..:)