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my wonderful life

July 17, 2012
By loveisntreal GOLD, Arcata, California
loveisntreal GOLD, Arcata, California
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Favorite Quote:
"you live what you've learned." -linkin park


look around
what do you see
is it safe
safe for me
i may be daring
i may be dangerous
but one thing I'm not
is curious
what ever goes on
i don't really care
i just sit at home
brushing my hair
i laugh my head off
while watching t.v.
the news channel sucks
its so boring
i watch sponge bob
like a boss
and eat noodle soup
and take my top off
the phone rings
while I'm taking a poop
my life is carefree
i have all i want
so who needs mystery
i definitely don't
so as i go to bed
and turn out the light
i smile to myself
and say
oh, my wonderful life:)


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Moniz said...
on Nov. 6 2012 at 10:20 pm
Moniz, Selah, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;A broken heart is like broken ribs. You can\&#039;t see the damage, but every breath hurts.\&quot;<br /> -Unknown

That was amazing! (:

on Oct. 23 2012 at 12:27 pm
ElmoCarlon BRONZE, Hillsborough, North Carolina
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I love this (:

on Aug. 15 2012 at 7:48 am
Nguyenkhanh SILVER, Ho Chi Minh, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I&rsquo;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can&rsquo;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&rsquo;t deserve me at my best.&rdquo;

This poem...although simple, has a definite young soul, singing her hearts out for all to hear and dance along. This poem, has the soul of a child, when i read it...i return to who i was years ago, once a dreamer, now a doubter. Why is this? Read my own writings my friend and you'll see why, my language is...very different from these poems you have. This poem, i think...is the simplest expression of youth I've come across now. Although, expand your vocabs will help, as it will color your taste further. Your poem have a taylor swiift, country feeling to it somehow, call me odd, but it does.