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July 16, 2012
By TheWickedOne GOLD, Newton, Illinois
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TheWickedOne GOLD, Newton, Illinois
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I'm tired of trying, sick of crying, I know I've been smiling, but inside I'm dying.

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slow motion
all around comotion
stand and star
dont know where iam
watch the sky never change
everybody fades
its just me here now
cant be found
black out
snap out
of reaity
to a world of dreams
cought in the seem of worlds inbetween
neve moving, never breathing
which ways heaven,which ways hell
i fell
into my mind
lost in time
cant find a way out im trapped
in my own thoughts
im locked
dont know what real, or whats fake
reality and my mind blend like watercolors spillt over the surface
my lifes not worth it
i wake
from my nightmare too find
that im alone in my mind and in life

© Alex S., Bethesda, MD

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