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Vengeance

April 13, 2012
By EbonyandIvory PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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EbonyandIvory PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Happiness is only a theory.<br /> Fate is my only enemy.

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I want vengeance
That's all I know
The word
The action
Vengeance

To say it
Invokes hatred
To make it
A motive
To achieve it
Unspeakable

I want vengeance
My parents told me
Unknowingly
Grabbing it is
How to survive

Envy
Jealousy
Anger
Frustration
None of them can measure

When you've done
What you've done
I get
So malevolent
There is no forgiveness
That you can give
I want vengeance

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

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Zach_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 10:04 pm
Zach_M BRONZE, Andersonville, Tennessee
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I thought it was very simple; your thoughts revolved around one thing, and you didn't elaborate thoroughly; you expressed Vengeance in a form of need, and it didn't make sense. Vengeance should never be a need toward anything unless it's provoked by a force in which opposed it. I thought this poem was rather unique though; i only wish you would have elaborated.
InuLover_95 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 3:09 pm
InuLover_95 BRONZE, Mena, Arkansas
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just three little letters... W... O... W... it's so sad and i feel the pain
Ebony W. said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:07 am
thanx always lookin 4 contributors
Ebony W. said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:07 am
thanx always lookin 4 contributors
Ebony W. said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:06 am
love ur stuff 2! always lookin4 contributors in my forums!
katieRainbows said...
on Apr. 25 2012 at 9:23 am
Good job love it
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 9:47 pm
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
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Very intense and very powerful, you definitely get the message across with emotion and urgency. 5/5.
SkylerMorningstar GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 8:38 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
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really cool :)
Katcarnero BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2012 at 9:22 pm
Katcarnero BRONZE, Waco, Texas
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Amazing :)
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 7:59 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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I really liked this poem and loved the word choice. Keep writing :))
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 4:46 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Filled with emotion. . . love it.

 

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