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You Tore My Heart Out

March 3, 2012
By Reignbow.Rebel BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
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Reignbow.Rebel BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
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"MY DOLLY IS GOING TO DIE!!!!"~Alex Sawyer

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You tore my heart right out of its place, and you broke it like an egg.
As I fall the to the floor, you walk out the door.

No one see the girl on the floor.

You tore out my heart, without contemplation. You tore out my heart without a thought of regret in your small little oval shaped head.

You tore my heart out, and now I'm dead.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

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Reignbow.Rebel BRONZE said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 3:45 pm
Reignbow.Rebel BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
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&quot;MY DOLLY IS GOING TO DIE!!!!&quot;~Alex Sawyer

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Thanks sooo much!!! :D
Special-Ice-Apples GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 9:47 am
Special-Ice-Apples GOLD, Pinedale, Arizona
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&quot;Love is just a word until someone special comes along and gives it a meaning.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I love walking in the rain, &#039;cause then no one can tell I&#039;m crying.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone who says sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain.&quot;

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and i love your writing, it's awesome!