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R.M.S.Titanic

February 26, 2012
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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R.M.S.Titanic...
They called it the Ship of Dreams,
it sailed along like a tranquil reverie.
Some said it'll reach the States, some questioned it's destiny.
The dreaded night arrived at last. A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it from the inside out, destroyed every single thing, sparing just a handful.
The mighty ship cleaved into half, plunging everything into the cold darkness of the infinite waters, plunging dreams, hopes, lives and love.
Titanic, a prisoner of fate, now lies underneath the Great Ocean, tranquil as when it first set sail, immortalizing a beautiful dream turned into a terrible nightmare...

© Hannah B., Princeton, IL

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AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2012 at 11:35 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thanks a lot :) yup I'll check out your work :)
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:06 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don&#039;t get anywhere are the people who don&#039;t dream of a better place for themselves...

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I really enjoyed reading this, it was really beautiful^^ I adore the movie and you captured me with the words you used. So pretty! Can you check out all the rest of my work and leave comments? Thanks dear! Keep writing!!!!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 7:39 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
compassion GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 4:32 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

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liked the pick of words:)well expressed

 

AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 11:25 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 9:06 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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&quot;...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, &#039;at last, the wheel comes full circle,&#039; they kept their silence.&quot;

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interesting. I love the compare/contrast
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 9:50 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 9:17 pm
KateLynnLeigh BRONZE, Farmersburg, Indiana
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&quot;The only way to get to the top is to get off your bottom.&quot;

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I really like it :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:49 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thanks :) me too! I'm a fanatic!
Just-Another-Girl GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:42 am
Just-Another-Girl GOLD, Keighley, Other
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- &quot;A coward may survive...but a hero..a hero lives on in the hearts of the people he saved&quot;<br /> <br /> - &quot;Words don&#039;t have the power to hurt people, unless the person who said it means a lot&quot;<br /> <br /> -<br /> You say that love is nonsense. I tell you it is no such thing._

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very good, i love the film titanic
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 10:10 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thanks for the comment 

;) It meant a lot to me!!

anytime!!

AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 10:07 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thank you :)
Macman11231 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 8:23 pm
Macman11231 BRONZE, Rhinebeck, New York
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wow what a deep poem. It really captures some amazing images.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 8:20 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thanks  :)
TTTeeSS GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:12 am
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
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There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.

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Read this the other day. Loved it, especilly the ending.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 3:52 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thanks :) ya I'll go through your work :)
Zero GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 9:24 pm
Zero GOLD, Langley, Washington
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Wow.... That was really good! I loved your word choice... You really captured the drama of this sad historical event. Please look at some of my work when you get the chance!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 9:38 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Glad you liked it :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 9:37 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
earthhashope SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 6:35 am
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
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Very well written!!!! Liked it a lot!!!