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Hurt Me or Comfort Me? YOU Choose.

February 4, 2012
By DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell them for a dollar, they're worth so much more after i'm a goner, and maybe then you'll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,"- The Band Perry

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I would rather bare the agonizing pain,
as the result of-truth of your mistakes,
over,
Pumping my heart full of lust,
Psyching my soul to believe it was true love,
With thy painful  lies,
 Yet,
In the end,
The choice  is yours,
 I am over it,
Thus proven I'm doing ten times better,
I shall promise you one last thing, 
My Love,
You'll be the one suffering in agony,
Such as the treacherous burden you forced upon my being.

© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
There is no need to sneak around and lie to any woman. I'm sure that any strong woman would agree with what I described in this poem. No woman should live in a life of lust, while her heart is being conned into believing this lust deep inside her soul is true love.
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batman said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 5:03 pm
i liked this one your a good writer and im sure alot of women who read this will like it to and feel the same way
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 7:47 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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I love this! Great Job. And yes, Id say i would have to agree with this poem..
DanniLynn SILVER said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 5:59 am
DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thank you!
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 4:20 am
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i really like this!