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December 19, 2011
By Zaid1315 SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
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Zaid1315 SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
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"No matter where life takes me find me with a smile" -Mac Miller

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I have loved
And I have lost
It was me you let go of
With love you pay a cost
I let you slip away
You wanted to leave
But I wanted you to stay
You left me with grieve
I realize I did this
Why did I let you go?
‘Cause it’s you I miss
Now I feel low
Do you miss me?
Or did you move on?
Do you feel free?
Remember me?Or am I gone?
You say your sorry
But do you mean it?

© Sarah N., Wadsworth, OH

The author's comments:
This is about losing the one you love and you blame yourself for losing them. Or, they said it was because of you that you aren't together anymore. I just wanted to share this with teens that feel this way like it was their fault.
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AngelsKiss PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 8:43 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

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This poem is unique and has a way with the words, try to go more with the flow of the rhythem, but the words you speak are true. Please read some of my work that's on here and comment as well:)