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Creep Through Darkness

January 6, 2012
By kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

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Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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Dipped into troubles, miseries and pain,
To think of it, regrettable, and all in vain!
Having remained unworldly,
And mistaken to be resilient and doughty.
Would’ve wished, it all to be reversed,
For, all the time, it was darkness emerged.

The state, before, was innocent, fierce or feeble?
How did they get it all so miserable?
Who was to be blamed?
Who was to be made to feel ashamed?
Only too late to realize it was no game,
Failing to think what it badly became.

The innocent ones led to woes,
What would have become of them?
Their providence turned out unlucky,
But just to hold strong and sturdy
And be positive in not giving up!
For all the bitter experiences to be refreshed,
Forget all the sadness and be restrained,
Leave the tragedy and live with the lessons!

© John O., New City, NY

The author's comments:
It's really hard to recover from great depression. But, miseries, show a lesson, too. Also, we have to be very careful when taking in such a condition. We got to try our best to overcome sorrows, and not give up!!!
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CaptainStar BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2012 at 2:28 pm
CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
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Wow Muzee. This sounds a lot like my life. Fantastic writing and Theank you.
Sabee said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 2:58 am
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interesting...i still dont know how u bring out the words like this...very nice
Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 8:55 pm
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good poem!!!
ashlyn939 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:34 am
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ohh I'm sorry:(
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 6:35 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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Thank u COOkie...... I really wanted to share a poem like this!
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 3:45 am
This is unique and beautiful. This is relatable. Good job :).
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 2:21 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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Yah. Recently, some of them shared their bitter experiences wit me . . And dats when i felt how terrible it is!
ashlyn939 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 7:36 am
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
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THis is really good i know what it feels like:)
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 11:19 am
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;-). . . Tnx for a different comment! Well, I wrote ths one 4 those who hav shared their sorrows wit me!
Tonite BRONZE said...
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its..........different and in a good way and dont woeey i like different!!!!!