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The Tradgedy Also Known As Love

December 14, 2011
By CJN0808 BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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CJN0808 BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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&quot;Experience, that most brutal of teachers; but you learn, my God do you learn.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> -C.S. Lewis

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Surrendering to the divinity
Returning to an eternity
Walking through a field of gray
Drowning in a heartless bay
Autumn comes, it's finally here
But just as soon, the coldness is clear
Blackness consuming my poor old heart
A marionette, doing my part
Forever shattered
Forever broken
Piercing the redness 
Pain the perfect token
You push me away
Your embrace so cold
I cry in remembrance 
Of your warm forgotten hold

© Chyla P., El Dorado, KS

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Himlen--Shellie GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2012 at 3:36 am
Himlen--Shellie GOLD, HotSprings, Montana
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&quot;A tragedy&#039;s a fairy tale with an alternate ending.&quot;

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Very good. I like your creativeness :D
kaylatheninjaturtle said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 9:23 am
kaylatheninjaturtle, Lebanon, Maine
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&ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss

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This is really good! If you wouldn't mind taking a look at my work? It'd be greatly appreciated. Keep writing!
shmam7624 SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:42 am
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
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I agree. It is very sad but I love the way you used your words. An amazing poem.
Imy_Spray GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 2:01 pm
Imy_Spray GOLD, North Shore City, Other
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And the day came when the risk it took to remain tightly closed in the bud, was more painful than the risk it took to bloom.

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:'( wow I love this... so sad and perfectly put
Imy_Spray GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 2:00 pm
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:'( omg I love this... so sad