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February 1, 2008
By Anonymous

What I could never tell my mother
Isn’t her fault; it’s mine
It’s things wrapped inside of me, coiled like wire with the filament exposed
She could accept them – those things – I’m sure
Maybe even love them the way she loves me; little puzzle pieces
That fell out of the box when we were putting it under the sofa
After we almost finished the puzzle together
But I hide them inside my deepest aorta
Keeping them safe because who wants to grab a still-beating heart?
It would kill me to take those secrets out
So my mother may know they exist
But she lets me keep them.
And maybe that’s the real secret, the one that
Shhhh
She doesn’t know –
It’s that I need some secrets of my own.

© Anonymous

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cass said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 7:07 pm
wow this was great it flowed really well and i relate :( youre really good!
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I can almost relate to it...
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Neat! It's definitely something I (and definitely other people) could relate to, and so well expressed ;)
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its really great. i feel the same with my mom unfortunately. you put it together well and so that it relates with others. double thumbs up
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I really love your word usage and how the whole thing led up to the end. Very well written
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Great job. I love it because i always feel this way.

merry christmas,

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Wow. I enjoyed reading that. Sometimes I feel the same way.
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The last few lines were beautiful
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<3 this is sooo good. i can totally agree with it. wonderful poem, very meaningful
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Definitely agreeing with you 100%....Take it to the top.... Keep it up....
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i love this beause i know exactly what the poem is saying, there a bzillion thousand things my mom doesnt know GREATGREATGREAT job :)

<3
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i never keep secrets from my moma :( mainly cuz i know she'll figure it out on her own someday.
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this makes me sad for some reason.
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i am the same way with my mother... if you have time please check out my poems
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This poem was really great and it really descibed exactly how i feel everyday. this poem really spoke to me. Great job. an i loved the way referenced the aorta of the heart. that was really creative.
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on Nov. 27 2009 at 6:32 pm
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This seriously made me shiver. I really love it because it's so true, and you express it so beautifully! Keep writing. :)
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i absoluty LOVE this poem...it reminds me so much of my relationship with my mother. great job:)