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I Tried So Hard

December 5, 2011
By MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
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I tried so hard.
I tried my best.
I gave you my all,
and now there's nothing left.

You stole my heart,
then tore it in two.
Now I'm falling apart,
and don't know what to do

© Heather H., Phoenix, AZ

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BlackPhoenix GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 3:37 pm
BlackPhoenix GOLD, North Bennington, Vermont
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good but it make the reader feel like it's not over, then again maybe that was the intent