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November 30, 2011
By KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
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KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I figure life is a gift and I don't intend on wasting it. You don't know what hand you're gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you...to make each day count."

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Dreams have became my reality,
I have lost all my mentality.
I see you two,
And then I see us boo.
I gave you my heart,
But then you tore it apart.
I show you my smile, it's so fake.
But, it was always yours to take.
I thought you'd be mine forever.
And we'd always be together.
Whatever happened to the glow you said you saw upon my face?
Look at me, you've turned me into a mental case.
Do you see how much this is killing me?
Wondering, if this is all we'll ever be.
You, the words I script.
And, me, the dirt you kick.

The author's comments:
I experience my first love and got my heart broken, after that I poured myself into writing. This is one of my favorite pieces that I wrote during that experience. But, there are more to come.
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Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:06 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

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I also would have to disagree with the use of the word "boo", but other than that its great! I really like it and it is easy to relate to for sure.
KWeiberg321 SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:32 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I figure life is a gift and I don't intend on wasting it. You don't know what hand you're gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you...to make each day count."

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Thanks for the honesty. (: & I know. I just kind of tossed 'boo' in there to rhyme with too. I was trying to maintain the same rhyme scheme through out the poem.
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:28 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

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i love this poem because so many can relate! i would avoid using the word "boo". and also the syllables are awkward in some places.