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I Feel Like a Fool

November 27, 2011
By Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Do you even miss me?
Do you even care that I am gone?
I suppose not,
I mean,
I always knew that I didn't matter,
that much to you.
Unless you wanted something that is.
I feel like a fool,
for falling into your trap so many times.
I feel like a fool,
for trusting you when I knew I shouldn't have.
But most of all,
I feel like a fool,
for letting you in when I shouldn't have,
because all you did was destroy me,
and make me more wary,
than I already was.

© Becky G., Westerville, OH

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Grkster SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:14 pm
Grkster SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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truly amazing. my emotions toward someone right now. 
pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:12 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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AMAZING! this could be a kick booty song! XD
KWeiberg321 SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 1:41 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
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Wow. Honestly, speechless. You described what has inspired me to write all my poems in this specific one. I have been trapped in a relationship like this for a VERY long time & this just wow. It reached out to me more than I could describe. My favorite definitely. (:
sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:37 am
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LOVED IT!:) I only have ONE suggestion. I think at the end you should say, "I am a fool." I just think it would give it more OOMPH. Lol. But other than that, it is really good. :) Great job! :))