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Cloud Nine Blue

November 29, 2011
By KShep12 GOLD, Lake Butler, Florida
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"It isn't where you came from, its where you're going that counts." -Ella Fitzgerald

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Those crystal blue eyes
send me cloud nine.
Within the time we talk,
I can't help but smile.
Baby you're my ship,
you send me out to sea.
Perfect we shall be,
I love the sound of 'we'.
We could be that couple
that everyone envies.
Baby this is it.
We will make it work.

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Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:19 am
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

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I agree with wonderment, this is just too cute! great job.
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 1:35 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I likeit, its cute
jaselisa GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 1:26 pm
jaselisa GOLD, Greensboro, Maryland
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i liked that
KShep12 GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:49 pm
KShep12 GOLD, Lake Butler, Florida
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I never even noticed that :)
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:47 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Lovely this poem reminds me of my first love and it shall be my only love. I won't ever love anyone the same.
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:43 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Nice.  I like how the rhyming flows. Sea, be, we, (then it's interrupted, nice touch) envies.  Brilliant.
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 10:32 am
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&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

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Great work, I especially love the line "Perfect we shall be,/I love the sound of 'we'." You should be carfull using reverse syntax (Yoda speak)like that, in most places if you do that only once in a poem it stands out to much and throws of the flow a bit. You did it well there, though, I liked it. I gave you four stars.