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November 28, 2011
By carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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Rain drops rushing down the window drip drip
rain drops racing down to see who can get to the bottom first
Rain makes all the plants very happy.
pit pat hearing the rain fall on the roof making relaxing sounds
wind swishing in the trees making them wet

© Jacob W., Royal Oak, MI

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I got inspired by having it raining all day and when I was in class.
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Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:53 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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short sweet GOOD!
iWriter365 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:56 pm
iWriter365 BRONZE, College Park , Maryland
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You&#039;re off to great places, today is your day, your mountain is waiting, so get on your way- Dr. Seuss

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Very nice, :)
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:43 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks that means a lot
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:43 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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your welcome and thanks
poetrylyrics BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 3:11 pm
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i really like your poem thanks for reading my poem .i had to leave and when i came back you were gone thanks : )
Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 12:50 pm
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Aww, I don't know why, but it made me think of a little baby. It just sounded adorable. Haha, good job!
Jappyalldayeveryday said...
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This is cute, kind of childish :)
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 6:08 pm
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dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks :) that means a lot
BeingAnna GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 5:23 pm
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Beautiful! Please keep writting, your style is amazing :)
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:45 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks i will
Lovestinks1395 GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:24 pm
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beautiful, keep writing. Keep me posted when you have new work posted!