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Silence

November 17, 2011
By Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

Hear the sound of silence,
The sound of our world's pain.
Resonating through the air
Tell me: Who's to blame?

Not the vices nor their puppets,
Spreading the human hate.
But the virtues and their guardians,
Who turn their heads and wait

For someone else to speak against
The wrong that stains the good.
Protagonists who say nothing;
Bad as criminals who do.

Explain to me, complacency
Hollow eyes watching here.
Defend for me, cowardly
Becoming mute when faced with fear

Violence, dreading,
Screaming! Hope to Doubt
All cancerously ebbing,
Yet no tongue lashes out.

To ignore is to accept,
To allow is to promote.
Silence burns me in my ears,
Words stagnant in your throat.

We are the sound of silence,
Reflecting our world's pain.
Find a voice and hear me,
Now is the time to end this game.



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on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:57 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you, thank you, thank you :) Again, I truly appreciate it -- such praise from someone as skilled as you, gahhh. You've made my day.

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:27 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

This truly is amazing!  Unlike a lot of free verse poems, this one has excellent capitalization and punctuation.  Bonus marks!  And the topic is a common one, but I can feel your anger through these wonderful, powerful words.  Excellent work!

Oh, I've added this to my favourites.


on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:01 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you :) And yay, someone else who thinks that the punctuation and capitolization matters! Glad to see I'm not alone XD

on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:18 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes.&quot; Revelation 7:17

I love the way you write and completely appreciate the punctuation and capitalization! so many people think it doesnt matter but i think it makes the poems that much better! love the poem!

on Dec. 6 2011 at 9:34 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you very much :) I really appreciate it

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on Dec. 6 2011 at 9:28 pm
x0x0xJ SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
7 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the thoughts in my head get bored and go for a stroll out through my mouth. This is rarely a good thing.

 I liked it! Meaningful, and I liked the rhyming! Good job:)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:27 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you, thank you :) Much appreciated XD

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:22 pm
Nathaniel PLATINUM, Huntsville, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;For there is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.&quot; --William Shakespeare

Brava! More, more! :P

on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:18 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

Thank you, it's very appreciated <3

And I totally agree on the forced rhyming -- it's my largest pet peeve


on Nov. 30 2011 at 6:51 pm
SophiaWood GOLD, New City, New York
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This is great. Most of the rhymeing poems i read sound forced and unpoetic but this is so lovely and rhythmatic. Beutiful

on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:59 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you very much <3 It's much appreciated (:

on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:35 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you :) And I understand bias -- everyone interprets everything differently. It's not for everyone. So I do appreciate your rating and comments ;D

on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:27 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
9 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Love the message and the way you wrote it. Its right on the edge of 5 stars. The only problem is that the subject isnt quite my cup of tea. its great though but my own bias is stopping me. I'll say 5 stars.

 


on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:05 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you -- for both the praise and the critique (first constructive comment, I really appreciate it). 

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:03 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments
Thank you (:

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:01 pm
EndlessSilenceOfMidnightDeath PLATINUM, Baker, Florida
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This is awesome.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:25 am
Akane-Ree BRONZE, New City, New York
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;She\&#039;s got it out for me BUT I WEAR THE BIGGEST SMILE&quot;

This was a good poem (though very depressing). I don't think that you should use phrases such as "tell me:". I particularly liked the part about the "good" doing nothing and being as bad as the antagonists, because for me that's the most true. people these days, when they see something bad, half of them just walk by it. The eivl of being a bystandar. 

on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:45 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

Well thank you! :) It's much appreciated <3

 

I'm going through your stuff now, and I'm enjoying it :)


on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:42 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Afterall, a loose screw doesn&#039;t want to need, and a hammer doesn&#039;t want to be needed.&quot; -Me<br /> <br /> &quot;Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely.&quot; -Me

I seriously LOVED this. I personally agree with every statement you made. I love the part where you say "To ignore is to accept." "To allow is to promote." Great job! I couldn't have said it better myself. I can honestly say, this poem amazed me in every single way. 5 out of 5 stars no question. Please keep writing. I would LOVE to read more. I would be honored if you commented/rated some of my poetry. Thank you for posting this beautiful poem. (: 

on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:07 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

Thank you :) Much appreciated, really.

 

And I was thinking abouut everything our world is filled with, and how most acknowledge that it's wrong... but yet do you hardly ever see anyone do anything? 

 

I don't like to analyze or explain my poems, because they are given meaning by the reader and what they bring to the table. What their views and experiences are. 

 

So it's about whatever you'd like it to be, but that's what I was thinking originally, and then I just wrote. No thoughts, just emotion through the pencil.