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November 11, 2011
By AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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you're so beautiful
I can't take my eyes off of you
your light green eyes
your crooked smile
rosy cheeks
freckles
the way your brown hair flows down over your eyes
the way your name sounds whenever I say it
you're so beautiful
yet you choose her
even though she could never love you as much as I do

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
This poem is very personal to me. One of my very first I've written. About someone I've really have grown close to. Sadly, we're separated now but it's alright.
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TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:31 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

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I feel the exact same way! as the title says, this is beautiful great work!
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:41 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Thanks guys!
pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:39 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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THIS IS ADORABLE, and honestly, so many people can relate to this! great work!
zombiescream.98 SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:27 pm
zombiescream.98 SILVER, Fort Collins, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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"Acting isn't lying, it's behaving truthfully in false situations,"

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Wow! I love your descriptions and your poem is very relatable.

 

anna_banana BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:11 pm
anna_banana BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
4 articles 1 photo 27 comments

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No one can make you feel inferior without your consent- Eleanor Roosevelt

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Omg. This is my life.
izyfizy said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 11:07 am
Oh my gosh! That's so sad! I'm sorry... (It IS a very good poem though!)