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A Lame Love Story

November 5, 2011
By Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;&#039;t let anyone else define who YOU are. Be Original! Be Unique! Be You!<br /> Follow me on twitter! LivyJoy144 I don&#039;t post lame things bout me day. More like fun quotes=)


I love him
Lame I know
But it’s true
My life’s like a sappy love story
The kind that people go out of their way to not see
I only wish he’d buy a ticket to see my life
So he would know what I feel
What I think
What I see
Then maybe he’d notice me
Remember me
Love me
I lost him
I thought he hurt me
I was wrong
I didn’t know what hurt was till he left my life
I’m love sick
And he’s the only cure
But someone else has already been prescribed him
She’s going to hurt him
I know it
I’ve seen her do it before
She’s just playing me
Not him
Me.
She wants to hurt me
She will do that by hurting him
She told me she’d get me back
I’m still not sure for what though
But he is the one that has to pay
I only wish he could see that
I love him
It’s my fault he’s getting hurt
If only I could tell him I’m sorry for what’s about to come
If only I could tell him
I love him



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on Dec. 25 2011 at 3:53 pm
Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 32 comments

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Don&#039;&#039;t let anyone else define who YOU are. Be Original! Be Unique! Be You!<br /> Follow me on twitter! LivyJoy144 I don&#039;t post lame things bout me day. More like fun quotes=)

i deff will look at your poem, think you could check out some of my other work? (i already posted this but it didnt look like it posted?)

on Dec. 25 2011 at 3:52 pm
Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;&#039;t let anyone else define who YOU are. Be Original! Be Unique! Be You!<br /> Follow me on twitter! LivyJoy144 I don&#039;t post lame things bout me day. More like fun quotes=)

thank you!

on Dec. 5 2011 at 7:30 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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We wouldn&#039;t ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we&#039;d all celebrate its tenacity, we&#039;d all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don&#039;t ask me why thank God and ask me how

Epic title! It's actually what caught my eye :) Good work Guess. 
Think you could check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past"? Would love your feedback.