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October 11, 2011
By P@inLe55 PLATINUM, Poteet, Texas
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P@inLe55 PLATINUM, Poteet, Texas
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Be your self and have fun, for you only live once

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Look at this mask this facade,
It covered my face and heart like a dark shade,
My life was dismal like a curse,
Even the black plauge wasnt worse,
Then like a doctor with a mask of her own,
You brought some thing to my life that wasnt much shown,
You made me believe again in love,
You brought me peace like a dove,
So i took off my dark shroud,
I once again became happy and loud,
I took the mask only for you,
Then for me you took off your mask too,
Most of my darkness floated away,
And im here with you to stay,
You cured the worst of me,
To me your the best doctor there can be.

© Liza C., Seattle, WA

The author's comments:
I was a dark depressed kid but you this girl appered she cured me, now all i want to do is be happy with her.
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