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La caresse du soirée

October 17, 2011
By jshawts SILVER, Ottawa, Other
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jshawts SILVER, Ottawa, Other
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"Missing someone gets easier everyday because even though you are one day further from the last time you saw them, you are one day closer to the next time you will."

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Night is ever so lonesome
For although I'd like to embrace the darkness with you
We are diverged by an entire nation of separation
And you are basking in the glorious sun,
While the moon's soft light feebly attempts
To fill the gap between our yearning hearts.

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jshawts SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 3:44 pm
jshawts SILVER, Ottawa, Other
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Missing someone gets easier everyday because even though you are one day further from the last time you saw them, you are one day closer to the next time you will."

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Thank you! And of course :)
Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 2:19 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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I like this. The title's really pretty, too. Especially after I read your translation :) Think you could check out my work sometime?
jshawts SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:27 pm
jshawts SILVER, Ottawa, Other
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Missing someone gets easier everyday because even though you are one day further from the last time you saw them, you are one day closer to the next time you will."

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Why thank you! I'm honoured :) and yeah, I'll work on them. And of course, it means "Evening's kiss" :)
AbstractFragment GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2011 at 2:15 pm
AbstractFragment GOLD, Dalmatia,, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You know what it feels like when all your teeth are falling out really slowly and you don't realize and then you notice that, well, they're really far apart. And then one day... you don't have any teeth anymore." - Where the Wild Things Are

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I like it, which is something I say very rarely. Although I think the first three lines perhaps need a little more stops, other than that I loved this. Can I ask what the title translates to?