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June 7, 2011
By jillyslomba GOLD, New York
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I’m a failure for this, for that I’m a no one.
For this I’m disappointed, and that I’m upset about.
This guilt annoys me, and I shouldn’t deal with that.
I feel this is pointless, because of that I’m pointless.
This cant be right, but that can be wrong.
Bewildered is this word, but that’s an understatement.
This is not correct, so that’s why I’m head down.
And I’ll walk like this, since that’s exactly how I feel.
I’ll drop this smile that I had on before.
This or that, or that or this,
Either way, I’m completely embarrassed.

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