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My Life

June 24, 2011
By Dkoch10 BRONZE, Hanover, Massachusetts
Dkoch10 BRONZE, Hanover, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I rather be hated for who I am, then lived for who I'm not"


endless rejection,
cause of my imperfection,
not good enough to pass anyone's inspection,
love and affection,
becomes lies and injections,
that turn into infections,
don't know what to do with all my bad decisions,
like head collisions,
that fog up my vision.

so I just sigh,
ignore the world not asking why,
I will look up to the sky,
breathe in its my turn to shine, want to live or die,
is a choice not a crime,
so this is now my time, this time is mine.

so feel the love till you scream,
i know its crazy as it seems,
if you pick sides you pick my team, stay awake as you dream,
I feel the pain from every week,
my stress level rises as we speak, a crack in life finally leaks,
if you don't know what its like then take a peak,
cause happiness is what i seak.


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Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:23 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that &#039;change is constant .&#039;<br /> For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner<br /> If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don&#039;t drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

I really liked the way everything rhymed. It made it more pleasurale to read. Oh and the metaphors were great too ( :

Good imagery ^^ .

Awesome poem ( :

Please check out mine - My Bonnie's Heart .

xxx.


Dkoch10 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:57 pm
Dkoch10 BRONZE, Hanover, Massachusetts
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I rather be hated for who I am, then lived for who I&#039;m not&quot;

Thank u! And i know :/ I typed it on my iPod so spell check went to thst "seak" and I didn't re-read. But thank you!:)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:41 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\&quot;

Wow. That was alot of rhyming....VERY nice job here. A few misspellings here and there, like the "seak" should be seek. But otherwise, great job!