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Goodbye

May 19, 2011
By lemondrop16 SILVER, Winchester, Indiana
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lemondrop16 SILVER, Winchester, Indiana
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There is a little girl in the crowd that wants to be just like you, don't disappoint her.

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I opened my heart,
and let you in.
You showed me the way,
of things that might have been.

When that shot to the heart,
made me see I wasn't in the right place,
I left without saying a word,
as a tear ran down my face.

You broke me in two,
and took the one I love.
You were suppose to be my best friend,
but you cut me down to the grave

I trusted you with all my heart,
but you just went, and tore me apart.
You put me in this deep depression,
and now I'm giving you my final confession.

I love you to death,
but death has arrived.
So I take my last breath,
to tell you goodbye.

© Courtney R., Great Falls, VA

The author's comments:
This is about the time my best friend and I got in a big fight because the guy i really liked that I was talking to recently stopped talking to me. Then she started talking to him.
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