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Eternal Rest

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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Death is the only time
you get to rest without
missing a thing. Not even
a loved one. Your always with the ones you love. It's like going to bed eternally.

© Tabatha B., Peoria, IL

The author's comments:
When I wrote this I was thinking about the loss of someone I loved who I feel with me everyday. I hope people will get that no matter who or when you lose someone they never really go away
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:26 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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it''s funny that u use the word serene it's similar to my name and it's meaning can u guess? thanks :P
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 12:04 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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A serene way to look at it. Nice.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:31 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks a lot i'm better at short pieces :P
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:26 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i really like it, its sad but good. In a way it makes me less afraid of dying, i like how a lot of you poems are short and simple but with a big meaning!
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:59 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks sorry i'm gonna look at some of your stuff
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:50 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks i like your username
ChildOfThePast SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:46 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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&quot;Things change. And friends leave. And life doesn&rsquo;t stop for anybody.&quot;

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This is good but I didn't like "Your always with the ones you love"

It feels rephrased. I love the first line, though

CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:14 pm
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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This is a great poem (once again!).  Yeah, someone I loved died, but she is still with me and will continue to be for as long as I love.  My only criticism is that the fourth line seems out of place because it's so long.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:29 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:21 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you  i'm glad you like it
alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:38 pm
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This was really sad but sweet. I really enjoyed reading it. You're a really talented writer :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2011 at 9:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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why thankyou and i do knowwho u are
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on May. 8 2011 at 9:52 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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i did you mentioned being a name known writer.thats a good career idea stick to it.btw i hope you know who this is lol

 

 

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 8 2011 at 8:36 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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I did it's pending approval fromt he editors. look atmy profile.
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on May. 8 2011 at 8:21 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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love this to u should think about posting your four metaphor on  here
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 4 2011 at 9:35 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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anyone who reads this plz comment I love to hear feedback
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 4 2011 at 9:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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hahaha reesa your awesome to
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER said...
on May. 4 2011 at 5:46 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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This be the same person that wrote on your other post hahaha you know what "ren" you are sooo awesome
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 4 2011 at 12:35 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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plz comment!!!!!