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March 21, 2011
By hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
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hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
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\"...because we all know...magic does not work through the phone.\" -Tomoko Katsu (my character)

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destructive life
beautiful death
out of control neatness
and harmful usefulness
fire...
is such a dark light

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im a pyro...i love fire
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hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 2:00 pm
hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
78 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"...because we all know...magic does not work through the phone.\" -Tomoko Katsu (my character)

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thank you very much, you just brightened my day
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 2:27 pm
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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"Like men we'll face the murderous, cowardly pack, pressed to the wall--Dying but fighting back." -Claude Mckay

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WOW. i really liked this peice, and I click your profile to see what else you had written, and I saw that you were all ready one of my favorite writters on here. You're very talented, keep writting :D
smilebright BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2011 at 3:35 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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diffrent. i like diffrent. please look at some of my work
rubyrainstorm SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:20 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
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This was...interesting...unique...and slightly odd...in a good way. I hope that you continue writing in your own personal style, just like this. Great job! If you have time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!!!! 8)