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Doesan't feel right

February 12, 2011
By faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
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Something in the way looking into your eyes doesn't feel right. Something in the way even in your arms I feel alone at night.
Something in the way I feel when I'm with you, something in the way I can breathe when I'm away. Something doesn't feel right should I leave or should I stay?
Something doesan't feel right everytime we kiss, something doesan't feel right it should be bliss.
Something doesan't feel right when you hold me close, I feel your heart beating fast but mine is still and morose.
Something doesan't feel right when you hold my hand, your palm is sweaty and mine is still and steady.
Something doesan't feel right when you call my name and I guess Im to blame for its such a shame you love me more than I could prepare for. And I am sorry for the way I feel or rather the way I don't feel for this love just isn't real.

© Belinda H., Palm Harbor, FL

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For anyone whos in a relationship and it just doesan't feel right
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