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February 5, 2011
By SparrowFeather GOLD, La Crescenta, California
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SparrowFeather GOLD, La Crescenta, California
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Favorite Quote:
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live."

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Your comments sound weak,
Your voices, unheard.
Your critiques feeble,
And your intentions blurred.
Flimsy words,
Trapped on a computer screen.
Nothing’s as good as paper.

© Alexis R., Clarkdale, AZ

The author's comments:
I was reading some of the comments left on my favorite pieces and they just seemed so insincere, but when I tried to express my thoughts on the works, I realized that mine weren't any better. It's too hard to feel the emotions behind words when you're reading them off a computer.
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