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Stupid Comments.

January 24, 2011
By swaggacaust DIAMOND, Guntown, Mississippi
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Educate yourself. Learn the things that you wann'a learn, not what this freakin' brain - washed society is making you think. - Cristofer Drew. ♥

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So many things running my head.

My temper was balancing on a tiny thread.

Your smart mouth kept me going,

Your ignorance was showing.



You kept firing off those stupid comments.

Your face made me want to vomit.

I reared back,

Took a hit.

© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY

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