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Feeling of Darkness

December 8, 2010
By BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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"Dont tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon!"

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It's like drowning,
with no relief.
Swimming to the surface
that feels impossible to reach.
Sure people try to help
but they only bring you further down
I want to breath
My lungs scream for the air
for some relief
leave me be
so i may drown in my own misery.

© Shira B., Marblehead, MA

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FrannyS said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 1:10 pm
I really like this. it's good.