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Breakign your fall

December 20, 2010
By Linghoon BRONZE, Stem, North Carolina
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Linghoon BRONZE, Stem, North Carolina
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God Grant me the serenety to except the things i cannot change the strength to change the things i can and the wisdome to know the difference.

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i watch-
etched in silence, that cold winter night
he went out the door and into the darkness
and i watched as your crumbled to pieces like rain.
fell to the floor-
again not again.
i came up behind you-
catching the shards,
cutting my fingers...
breakign my heart.
when will you listen!
your trend and your style-
they speak so much more than your friend.
reconcile!
my heart can't keep breaking your fall....

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i came up behind you-
catching the shards-
cutting my fingers
breaking my heart
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Linghoon BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 4:49 pm
Linghoon BRONZE, Stem, North Carolina
1 article 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Grant me the serenety to except the things i cannot change the strength to change the things i can and the wisdome to know the difference.

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thanks :) i will check out some of your work!! 
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 4:41 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Very good! I like it. Very emotional!