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Invisible You

December 3, 2010
By BookWorm579 PLATINUM, Elk Grove, California
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BookWorm579 PLATINUM, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"à cœur vaillant rien d’impossible [nothing is impossible to a willing heart]" -French Proverb

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Can we see the air we breathe
As it washes over us in silken waves,
Bringing life on invisible currents?

And are we as likely to stand in a lightning bolt?
See charges cascading into the sky
And sea sand melting into glass?

When I see you,
When I hear you;
I can feel you,
Rushing, flowing, swirling you,
Pooling around me, drowning my heart.

And you are more than what I see or hear.

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