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November 20, 2010
By Anonymous

I fell asleep in my underware
crying with the heating blacket on
hugging a pillow with my legs
a tissu box in my arms

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Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2010 at 5:35 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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dose it matter??? lay off so what i cant spell
416tmw BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:35 am
416tmw BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Nice poem love the first line, i know the feeling, But hey, try spell check next time.
imkayydavis SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:23 am
imkayydavis SILVER, Missouri City , Texas
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Overall it was nice
imkayydavis SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:22 am
imkayydavis SILVER, Missouri City , Texas
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The poem should have been longer and should have been more explainable after the line "a tissu box in my arms." Also, the word "tissu" was spelled wrong.