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You & Me & What I want us to be

October 13, 2010
By Lost_and_Insecure BRONZE, Monroe, Wisconsin
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Lost_and_Insecure BRONZE, Monroe, Wisconsin
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"Let the rain fall down, just be ready for the lightning strike as the thunder rolls."

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If I looked you in your eyes,
What would you see in mine?
Would you see that helplessness,
that burning pool of hurt,

[Chorus]
If i gave you what you wanted,
would you finally love me,
If i showed you that I am broken,
could i just maybe have a little of your non-exsistant sympathy,

but no, this is not my reality,
this is just one of my dark fantasy's,
starring you and me,
this may make us enemies

[Chorus]

This is not my reality

© Sarah M., Phoenix, AZ

The author's comments:
I know it's not very long, but it definately tells my feelings for someone that I've known a couple of years now..
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Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 6:09 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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This is powerful and I can totally relate. Short is sweet and you showed that really well here :)
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 3:08 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Oh yeah and even though it's short it say a lot
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 3:08 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Awwww I like this it's sad. It's kinda how I feel :///