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When I Look at You

September 30, 2010
By ShootingStarz GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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When I look at you
I feel tense inside
When i look at you
I see my other half
When i look at you
I realize...
Your the one who changed me
your the one who made me better
When i look at you
i get lost in your eyes
When i look at you
We combine as one
When i look at you
i see the truth
when i look at you
It makes me proud to have someone like you

© Amanda T., Montague, NJ

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This is about someone special who i truely care about. Just what came to mind while thinking about this person
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kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 11:33 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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ANYTIME ;) ya i know how you feel! :P keep writing and posting!
ShootingStarz GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:41 pm
ShootingStarz GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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thanks a billion! i am new at this so i need as much feedback as possible. thanks for checking out my poem
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:32 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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awwwwwwv(: sooo cute :) really a beautiful poem keep writing! check out some of my work?