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When It Comes

September 4, 2010
By SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
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SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
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You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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Will we go back around?
In circles
Like love-wrecked fools
How we feel
Day after day
I want you now,
Let’s not focus on forever,
Just today.
And tomorrow?
That’s a new day
When it comes, it comes
We’ll worry about it when it comes
We’ll be back around

© Julia R., Bethesda, MD

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All we do is go in circles.
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SimplySloan PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 12:08 am
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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Thanks so much! And it's fine, really. Don't stress it (:
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 5:32 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I'm sorry; for some reason I couldn't really comment more than a few words on your other article. So I apologize if I was annoyingly brief and repeated comments. I also seemed to miss that your story didn't relate to you. Oops.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 5:30 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Ah, well said! Indeed, repition is what rules many of our lives. I loved reading this, for it seems true; its message says to enjoy the moment. I like the rhythm and wording,  so well done.