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Crashing Freedom

July 28, 2010
By IsaiF GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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IsaiF GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
“Be soft. Do not let the world make you hard. Do not let pain make you hate. Do not let the bitterness steal your sweetness. Take pride that even though the rest of the world may disagree, you still believe it to be a beautiful place.” -Kurt Vonnegut

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can you feel me behind you?
watching each move
learning to be happy, but





ALL
of my suffering
hidden from the
world trapped
as i vanish






MY
surroundings
you keep me behind
bars of altruistic
selfishness and




FAILED ATTEMPTS
to crawl out have
tumbled with my
essence; with my dreams
keep trying





TO FLY
but like fragile wings
of cranes flap but
don't soar in the sky
they




ARE STILL HERE
to stay
with me

The author's comments:
after you read the poem. read the caps. it makes a message :D
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