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June 28, 2010
By tomtamtimmy GOLD, Sydney, Other
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tomtamtimmy GOLD, Sydney, Other
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you don't know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

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i think so deep
i slip away
into the coiling tide that is my mind
submersed and drowning
like a fly in a web
i get tangled
your not there
I'm not there
the worlds done a back flip.
every step i take a wall breaks
a fruit is split
a stone is turned
I'm into a new world
I'm abstract!
I'm a bird in the sea
the worlds flat
the fish in the air
are gonna give you a pat on the back!
I'm gonna be up the wall
on my back
...
but then you wake me up
you pull me out
hello logical world



you suck

© Maria H., Cincinnati, OH

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