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Fake Sky.

July 9, 2010
By Anonymous

The sun is shinning brightly
As I'm walking down the blue ocean.
The wind is blowing lightly
Messing up my long hair with its slow motion.

As I look up at the deep blue sky
With each second my heart beats faster.
Do you think that I can fly?
Theres a cliff ..Should I give it a try?

I'm walking towards it,
I'm scared i will admit.
But I'm walking towards it.
I know I want to quit.

I turn around. Look around.
I hear some sound. Someone's voice.
Don't go. Don't Do it. Its a mistake.
You'll kill yourself. The sky is fake.

I hear the voice but see no body.

I open my eyes
I'm wet with sweat.
This is the dream
I won't forget.



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Jenny Millie said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:36 pm
WOW! so strong! i love it!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 3:23 pm
alenkaaa BRONZE, Battle Ground, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing. With a broken heart. Thats still beating...

thank you! and yes i will:) i always return favors!:)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 3:06 pm
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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great job! i could even picture this in my mind(: keep writing! and can u rate my work?

Kelly Cooney said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 2:25 pm
Kelly Cooney, Vancouver, Alaska
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wow! this poem is strong! i could feel the tension while reading it!!! Great job!! keep writing!!!!!