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Loving Your Smile

July 3, 2010
By punkr0cker365 ELITE, Bedford, New York
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punkr0cker365 ELITE, Bedford, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.&quot;<br /> Kurt Cobain

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I love the way you smile, been
thinking about this for awhile.

I can't get you out of my mind, you're really kind.

When I see you around, sometimes it feels like I've drowned.

It's telling me to stand my ground, but I just can't when you're around.


I want to hold you in my arms, away from worlds harm.

I want to kiss you like there's no tomorrow, just take me away from all this sorrow.

Even though we don't talk, all we need is to take a walk.

I'll show you everything about me, just hoping you will see, this is all we can be, if there was a you and me.


If the world would leave me alone, I will enter you into my zone.

Into my zone you will go, I will follow you in with the flow.

Don't ever need anyone other.

I will give you my love, fly away like a dove.

All I can say, is I love your smile

© Jill H., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
I've been writing to this guy I really like anonymously on this website formspring. I decided to show my emotions for him through poetry. So that's how this poem blossomed and grew. For anyone who will read this, I know most of you can relate to this feeling, this emotion. I hope you enjoy it!
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JakeShaw PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:44 am
JakeShaw PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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You pour feeling into this piece and you can really feel that its personal! Amazing work!