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July 6, 2010
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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And the bloody feathers fell
into the pool of red
that lay beside the lifeless eyes
the once beautiful peacock
stripped of its pride

© Cassie H., Carmi, IL

The author's comments:
poem i wrote a long time ago, just found it in one of my first entries in my diary. :)
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TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 3 2013 at 12:51 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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Thank you so much! :) I really appreciate it and sure thing!
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 2:06 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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thnx so much i really appreciate comments!
LovelyPeace08 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 3:46 pm
LovelyPeace08 BRONZE, Vestal, New York
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&quot;Unforgiveness is the posion we drink till the other person dies.&quot;

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You have a profound abilty to into a random object, deeper than the surface, and describe it's condition in depth. Awesome!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:20 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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WOw im sure this is going to be put in the magazine!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!