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June 29, 2010
By Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
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"LIfe is worth a few bumps and brusies."

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My heart longs for you,
Even when you are six-feet under,
I have seen your grave and whisper,
These gentle words,
I cry over your looks,
Knowing I won't see them,
I prey for your return,
I overcome nothing when I think of you,
My grief last over time,
No new love can enter,
I will never forget your touch,
Nor your smile,
I will never forget you at all,
I will just say these words repeatedly,
Until I am at peace with you at last.

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I wrote this for someone you lost there loved one. I'm sorry.
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Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:29 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Your very welcome! Keep up the wonderful job!!! :)
Tiffany_Avalos GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:24 am
Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
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thank you so much!!!! :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:13 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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OMg this is so powerful... i love the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:19 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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This is really good!!! It has so much emotion... FANTASTIC!!! :)