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June 22, 2010
By xAlicex SILVER, Fort Bragg, North Carolina
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&quot;Let us not look back in anger, nor foward in fear, but around in awareness.&quot; <br /> -Dr. Suess

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I am relaxed.
I see the beautiful sun setting.
I see the reflection of the sun against the lake.
I hear the bullfrogs.
I hear the wind swaying in the trees.
I smell water and coolness.
I smell sand and fun.
I can go swimming far.
I can cool down.
I taste the fun all around me.
I taste the giggling that we make when we get splashed.
I feel relaxed.

© Cherry L., Ceritos, CA

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem at summer camp. We had a lake there and I was sitting on the peir dangling my feet off of the side and I noticed how beautiful it looked with the sun setting on the lake and us girls splashing around so I ran to my cabin, got my poem book, pen, and ran back to the lake and wrote this poem. Enjoy.
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