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Thirteen-Year-Old To The World

June 22, 2010
By BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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My life's a wobbly roller coaster.
There's the twists and turns,
the ups and downs,
and always the anticipation
of the next plummet.
It may seem
like we're having the most fun,
but it's harder than it looks.
Every loss, every painful reminder,
is like taking away a piece
of my already-unstable ride.
A whisper of wind,
a purposeful shove,
and everything
will come crashing down.

© Jorrdyn K., Washougal, WA

The author's comments:
Thank you Mrs. Demerjian, my seventh grade English teacher, for assigning this,(:
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Babylufin GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:43 pm
Babylufin GOLD, Liberal, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"'For I know the plans I have for you', declares the Lord, 'plans to prosper you and not harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11. Thank you Lord, for this future you've given me.

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Oops, I didn't mean to make that a reply. =/
Babylufin GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:42 pm
Babylufin GOLD, Liberal, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"'For I know the plans I have for you', declares the Lord, 'plans to prosper you and not harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11. Thank you Lord, for this future you've given me.

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Aaawesome!! I loved it!

Please take a look at some of my work, if you have time! :)

ElenaSnapz PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 1:11 am
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i really liked this a lot, i think you used really good word choice :)

 

and i hope you can take a look at some of my writings and give me your opinion because i'm going to read yours :)